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The madness within by *lenden:iconlenden:



They fell to silence. Her blood dripped down the wall towards her slumped carcass, and the brunette began to laugh. Nervously at first, but as the others began to look at her in disbelief, her amusement grew.

"Blood isn't supposed to flow TOWARDS the body!" She giggled, before falling to the ground, spasming from fits of laughter.

No one spoke, but waited, and her laughter turned to wracking sobs of grief. She quieted after a time, but remained on the floor, simply staring at the crumpled body of her now deceased lover.

Suddenly, the redheaded girl fell, in the middle of the silent crowd. The blonde boy caught her, and sat, cradling her unconcious form in his arms.

The remaining two males didn't have a clue as to the correct corse of action, so they sat together against the opposite wall, and hoped for a release from the madness.

                                                 It never came.
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It's not that... Horror...-y... But. I dunno, that was the closest category I could think of.

Anywho, ya'll are welcome to make up your own story to go along with what's happening, or what already occured... Yeah.

I wrote it 'cause I just knew you all needed an excuse to exclaim WTF?! and mean it. ^-^

By the way, their names are Tanya, Allisa, Reya, Mark, Micheal and Toby. Tanya's the dead one, Allisa is her lover, Reya is Allisa's sister, Mark is the boy who caught Reya, and Micheal and Toby are the boys last mentioned.

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=pink-and-overrated:iconpink-and-overrated: Apr 24, 2008, 1:44:03 AM
very well written

especially when describing the grieving process

very solid to build off of

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*lenden:iconlenden: Apr 24, 2008, 5:33:42 PM
Thanks! I was thinking about writing more about it, but I just ended up drawing it, instead. On lined paper, of course. >.<

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~SunniDanni:iconSunniDanni: Apr 26, 2008, 4:09:55 AM
Course of action.

Lesbian lovers? o_O

Not my kind of story.

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*lenden:iconlenden: Apr 28, 2008, 11:07:16 PM
what's wrong with lesbians?

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Here I am, broke, sick, everything wrong, wouldn't be surprised if the fish I don't own suddenly died...Wondering, when is life gonna give me a fair shake and just hit me with a car? -Lenden
~SunniDanni:iconSunniDanni: Apr 29, 2008, 5:51:41 PM
I don't swing that way.

Also, I'm fairly religious.

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*lenden:iconlenden: May 4, 2008, 9:05:41 PM
Well, it's ok for you to not like girls. ^-^
I don't know if I want to get into this conversation, though, with you being religious against homosexuality, because I'm a pretty big supporter of freedom of choice. I don't believe love needs to be male/female. Love is love, you know?

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Here I am, broke, sick, everything wrong, wouldn't be surprised if the fish I don't own suddenly died...Wondering, when is life gonna give me a fair shake and just hit me with a car? -Lenden
~SunniDanni:iconSunniDanni: May 8, 2008, 12:13:09 AM
There are many choices to make.

I'm hungry... I want a cookie.

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"The Dreams of the Young are Grand and Delusional.
Stop deluding yourself, you aren't young anymore."
*lenden:iconlenden: May 8, 2008, 7:23:27 PM
*pulls cookie out of the cookie jar and hands it to you*

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Here I am, broke, sick, everything wrong, wouldn't be surprised if the fish I don't own suddenly died...Wondering, when is life gonna give me a fair shake and just hit me with a car? -Lenden
~SunniDanni:iconSunniDanni: May 8, 2008, 8:44:27 PM
I want a double choc chip cookie.

That's a pecan cookie.

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"The Dreams of the Young are Grand and Delusional.
Stop deluding yourself, you aren't young anymore."