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Goodbye by =lenden:iconlenden:

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Goodbye Mommy
Goodbye Daddy
Goodbye friends
And goodbye family

Today's the day I leave you all
Today's the day I take the fall

I'm sorry it must be this way
But glad I am to ease the pain

I wanted to be free of fear
But it hurts every time I look in the mirror

Goodbye Mommy
Goodbye Daddy
Goodbye friends
And goodbye family

Tell me life is hunky dory
Tell me I've no need to worry

Give me sweet sweet lies to hold
Let me believe what I'm told

I know I promised not to do this
At least I know that I will be missed...

Goodbye Mommy
Goodbye Daddy
Goodbye friends
And goodbye family...
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Um... Yeah.
I wrote this on the way to school this morning. I just...
Eh, I hurt sometimes, and I sort of...
This is how I feel sometimes.
I don't think that I could leave the people who love me like that, but sometimes... Sometimes I consider it.
Well, life isn't all that bad. I have friends, good friends, and a wonderful family, I'm going to school, I may be broke, but I survive. Life's actually pretty alright.

Anyway, thanks for showing up and commenting.
*hint hint*
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Mood: Angsty =Snyper-mara:iconSnyper-mara: Jan 25, 2008, 6:18:50 PM
Damn...do I ever know what you mean....

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The Early Bird gets the worm...but the 2nd Mouse gets the cheese!!
~junkauge:iconjunkauge: Jan 25, 2008, 6:22:14 PM
aww poor you, heres something to take your mind off of it

CHOOSE!!

:sushi: or :donut:

each are incredibly delicious but both carry terrible terrible consiquences *shakes head*
or do they?
choose if you dare!
:XD:

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光 | "All Those people that look like they're thinking... But their not. How Discusting" Anemone - Eureka 7
=lenden:iconlenden: Jan 25, 2008, 6:49:02 PM
Well, of course I choose the :donut:. I'm a sugaraholic.

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*nods sagely*
=lenden:iconlenden: Jan 25, 2008, 6:49:56 PM
Yeah. I've found that many people are sadder on the inside than on the outside, too.

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*nods sagely*
~junkauge:iconjunkauge: Jan 25, 2008, 7:36:09 PM
:ohnoes:
the donut!
infinite happyness lies within its sugary goodness
only the strongest can survive this onslaught of happyness! XD

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光 | "All Those people that look like they're thinking... But their not. How Discusting" Anemone - Eureka 7
=lenden:iconlenden: Jan 25, 2008, 7:39:02 PM
I must be the strongest, then! Mnnnn.... Donut...

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*nods sagely*
~junkauge:iconjunkauge: Jan 25, 2008, 7:54:50 PM
Bahaha sweet, now i can steal the sushi of serenity bwahahahaha

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光 | "All Those people that look like they're thinking... But their not. How Discusting" Anemone - Eureka 7
=lenden:iconlenden: Jan 25, 2008, 7:56:26 PM
Steal? Why not just ask?

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*nods sagely*
~junkauge:iconjunkauge: Jan 25, 2008, 8:08:40 PM
because its more fun ^_^ :XD:

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光 | "All Those people that look like they're thinking... But their not. How Discusting" Anemone - Eureka 7
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